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BobbyBlueChip

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DSL - ~ 10 seconds. Color scheme and music was catching and liked the loading of "functional page ???" across the screen

http://www.persistentent.com/

DSL - ~4 seconds. Hated it. Music's too loud and unprofessional and there's nothing upbeat about janitorial services. I think that reliability would be what I would look for and letters popping up and then dispersing doesn't really convey that message.
 

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Re: feedback please

Visual:
#1 none straight to quote.
#2 dsl
#3 I like the quote and building you picked out. Needs to keep updated. Most sites like this have 2-3 months worth of info and they never update. If they keep current this should be an excellent selling tool for them. Looks very professional but this look will backfire without good content.


Visual:
#1 2 sec, very fast
#2 dsl
#3 Bobby is right the site does look a little childish, but I don't think it is that much of a hinderance when you take into consideration the people looking for these products are bored of the drab everyday cleaning sites that are just information based. The fact that they are "ahead of the curve" makes a good impression. The impression I got is that this company is on the cutting edge and they will have the best and newest services avaliable.


Good Luck I hope the feedback is helpful.
 

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Number one was a lot nicer than number two. Really liked how the page was set up. Easy to use and very good design.
 

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Site #2 grabbed my attention more but I always prefer content over attention grabbing so site #1 is setup to be a success in my opinion.

You get attention with the nice intro but the content is clearly what is showed as being the main thing.

Nice work
 

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I didn't really care for either one. The first is all show and no content. Blazer's comment about the information being the same months down the road happens to every other website like this. The second one Blazer hit the nail on the head again. I'm not sure if janotorial services need to be upbeat. I deal with facility maintenance and janitorial departments every day. If there is something that they don't like (in general) is technology and new age items. I think this may detract more people than attract.

Just my opinion. The websites "look" really nice. I don't know if there is anything that sets them apart from any other website, though.

Are these projects of yours? If so, I hope you don't look at the above comments as anything but constructive criticism. What are you writing in?

Good luck!
 

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Cable hook up here.

Took about 20 seconds to load the first one, and about 5 for the second. I like the look of the second one better. (More straight to business, and less fluff.)
 

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One thing about building flash sites. You really have to get a idea of what the client is looking to do with his or her site. Sometimes sites are built that we hate but the client loves. I love hearing everyone's comments. One thing about gamblers. If they think it sucks they say so. Plus constructive criticism is good IMO.
 

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gcs--After reading my post again, I hope I did not sound too harsh. I have a tendency to do that at times. Do you only build Flash websites or do you do the HTML as well. I can give you two examples of our websites over time.

The first, Micajah, was built for us by narrowing down the field of Flash programmers. The girl that we went with had some good skills, but we never could get the look or feel across on the website. Just as much our fault as hers. Once through the first Flash segment, click on the Custom Development link. Still not what we were going for, but that's the nature of the art, IMO.

So after our failed attempts at getting the right message with a Flash intro, we decided to go with a straight HTML website. Basically, this serves for information purposes only, but that is why we feel a person goes to our site. We have had this website, bigWebDesk, for about two or three years now. It's easy to update with new features and upgrades, and it is very straight-forward. We depend on search engines and target-market websites to drive traffic to the site. We just hope the information that someone is looking for can be gathered here.

I do not design websites. I do help with the content. I notice spelling errors all of the time on our site, and I think that looks really bad. If I had full control over our site, I would correct these. As of now, it is a process.

Once again, this is just my two cents. You are absolutely correct when you say that the designer must follow the guidelines given by the client. Most of the time that hinders what the designer can do.

Good luck in your development!
 

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We can do both. I will put up a few more examples as the months go on. IMO a website is nothing with content. ANy these sites listed are mainly builds just got on the net so the content will improve over time. Dawgball you where not harsh at all.:)
 

goldcupsports

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The flash site is really neat as in eye catching. There is no question some talent behind the builder of that one. But IMO it is just to much there is way to much going o Looks more like a spot on tv than a website. As in for seh engines if you are not listed good @ Google take your site down until it is....:D The HTML website is straight foward and well layed out. I think flash site will be come bigger as the DSL and cable markets grow.... Time will tell:)
 
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