I think the fact that it is a 2 page critique is part of the problem. Dawkins' book is 374 pages long and his scienific arguments make up a a decent chunk of the book, but that is not the part that needs to be focused on (IMO). This essay is only 2 pages and covers 3 chapters of a 10 chapter book.
Here are some chapters that I'd like to see discussed from the religious perspective:
6. The Roots of Morality: Why Are We Good?
7. The 'Good' Book and the Changing Moral Zeitgeist
8. What's Wrong With Religion? Why Be So Hostile?
9. Childhood, Abuse and the Escape From Religion
Here are some chapters that I'd like to see discussed from the religious perspective:
6. The Roots of Morality: Why Are We Good?
7. The 'Good' Book and the Changing Moral Zeitgeist
8. What's Wrong With Religion? Why Be So Hostile?
9. Childhood, Abuse and the Escape From Religion