Dialogue Between a Husband and Wife ~

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{A kitchen at night. HELEN, a woman in her forties, is sitting at the kitchen table, waiting. DAVID cracks the door, shakes out his umbrella, raises his head and sees HELEN sitting at the kitchen table with her shoulders hunched up around a mug of tea. He stamps his muddy shoes loudly on the kitchen tile and makes a fuss of unbuttoning his coat before coming over.}

DAVID: "Danny asleep?"

{Without looking up at him, HELEN puts a finger to her lips and nods. He opens the refrigerator.}

DAVID: "Anything I can eat?"

HELEN: "You don't even care what you've forgotten."

DAVID: "What?"

{He opens the cupboard, scans the items restlessly, and closes the cupboard again.}

HELEN: "Look at you, David! You don't even care what you've forgotten today."

DAVID: "All right, tell me what I've forgotten."

HELEN: "Don't you understand what I am saying to you? You wouldn't even care if you knew what you had forgotten."

DAVID: "All right, then tell me what I've forgotten already!"

HELEN: "Don't you understand what I'm saying to you? Are you even listening to me?"

DAVID: "Yes, yes, yes, I'm listening! I've just gotten back from working a fourteen-hour day and this is how you talk to me? I'm listening, now tell me what I've forgotten so we can get on with our lives!"

HELEN: "Be quiet, you'll wake Danny!"

{She slides the nearly empty mug across the kitchen table with an angry flick of her wrist.}

HELEN: "You still don't get it. It doesn't matter that you missed Danny's championship soccer game, it matters that you don't even give a damn about it! If you had just taken five minutes today just to consider what your son has been talking about constantly for the last three weeks--"

DAVID: "So it was the soccer game. Finally, a straight answer! Danny might not understand now, but he'll understand eight years from now when he can't go to the college he wants because I didn't work fourteen-hour days! You're giving me all this crap just because I'm the only one trying to get a little ahead?"

HELEN: "I'm not talking about all the work you do, I know how hard you work. I'm talking about a little consideration for how disappointed your son feels today, not in eight years-"

DAVID: "You think you know how hard I work? You have no idea how hard I work! Every day it's the same thing, all the stress I have to deal with, all the people I have to fire -- you don't appreciate how hard I have to work! All you can think about is these PTA meetings and piano recitals and how I've let down Danny once again!"

HELEN: "You're still not hearing me, David, you're hearing me but you're not understanding -- you never understand what I'm saying to you. You never even look at me when I'm talking to you--"

DAVID: "Don't go into all that again! Don't you go making this about me and my problems. You won't even tell me what I can do. What? What can I do, other than make sure there's a roof over my son's head? What? What do you want me to do?"

HELEN: "There's something more important than paying for the piano lessons and the soccer team! It's more important to be at the recital and the championship game than to pay for it!"

DAVID: "How can I be there if I'm not paying for it? It won't exist, and Danny'll be sitting here at home, a social outcast unless I make sure he can go to the drawing class and the soccer practice and the writing workshop and the junior yoga sessions!"

HELEN: "Still, it's more important for you to be there than to pay for them!"

DAVID: "How can I? How the hell can I?"

HELEN: "You're not even trying to understand me, you don't even care! You just want to win this argument, but if you win, David, if you win-" {Her voice is suddenly low and threatening.} "If you win this argument with your logic, you'll lose. Because it's not about winning this argument, David, it's not about you or me being superior over the other! For God's sake, David, it's about Danny, and if you win this argument, he'll lose!"

{David pounds his fist on the marble countertop in his frustration.}
DAVID: "You're just talking in circles, you're just saying whatever crap comes into your head to throw me off, but I will not feel guilty about what I have to do! I will not! I refuse!"

DANNY: "Mom! Mom, what's going on?"

HELEN: "It's all right, Danny. Go back to bed."

{They stand in taut silence until they hear the bedroom door close.}

HELEN: "You see!"

DAVID: "See what?"

HELEN: "How can you not see it?"

{He throws his hands up in the air.}

DAVID: "I am not having this conversation again!"

{He thumps into the hall for bed.}
 

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Upstairs watching sports on the big TV.
Sorry, I am on serious decongestants....

Sorry, I am on serious decongestants....

While on the way to the bedroom, head throbbing, David stops at the closet where his
faithful Glock 19 is hidden.

Reassured it is where he carefully hid it under boxes of Halloween
Decorations and 6 inches of insulation, he returns to the kitchen and grabs a cold six pack and a pack of smokes.

Grabbing up his cleaning kit, hollow point bullets,Glock, he places them in a gym bag and discreetly heads to the garage.

He enters the garage, turns on the lite, and locks the connecting door.

This is David's own little sanctum. It is surrounded by tools, his project 1986 Iroc Z Camaro, and peace and quiet. A place he could freely contemplate without the shrill cry of a winged harpy.

Dave pulls up a tattered old office chair, turns the radio on, volume very low, lights a smoke, pops a cold beer, puts his feet up on the work bench, fondles the Glock, and contemplates the future....

Meanwhile, inside the house....
 
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I read the entire thing. Was I supposed to draw my own conclusion?? I didn't pick up anything from any of it of importance..............Just two adults talking in circles with neither understanding the other.:0008
 

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Meanwhile, back in the house, Helen is sitting at the kitchen table. Her minds wanders back to high school, when she was banging that guy they called Jas. She remembers it like it was yesterday, the entire fight word for word that led to the break up. She wanted Jas to go to her step sisters aunts daughter in laws great cousin once removed first grade graduation. Jas on the other hand wanted to go to the game he had bet on. A huge fight ensued and she threated to cut Jas off.Jas asked her one question that had been with here since that day. The question Jas asked was she the only female with a vagina? She said no. He explained to her that she couldn't cut him off because she didn't know where he was getting it from that day forward.
Meanwhile,back in the garage,,,,,,,:0corn
 

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Meanwhile, back in the house, Helen is sitting at the kitchen table. Her minds wanders back to high school, when she was banging that guy they called Jas. She remembers it like it was yesterday, the entire fight word for word that led to the break up. She wanted Jas to go to her step sisters aunts daughter in laws great cousin once removed first grade graduation. Jas on the other hand wanted to go to the game he had bet on. A huge fight ensued and she threated to cut Jas off.Jas asked her one question that had been with here since that day. The question Jas asked was she the only female with a vagina? She said no. He explained to her that she couldn't cut him off because she didn't know where he was getting it from that day forward.
Meanwhile,back in the garage,,,,,,,:0corn
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